6. Eye Contact: Write about two people seeing each other for the first time.
His eyes were brown, the color of the earth. He smiled, reminding her of a fox. The way the sun shone down on him made him almost appear angelic. Like he had fallen from the heavens. It was cliche but it was true. She had suddenly forgotten how to breathe. Her legs felt unsteady and nearly failed her when he spoke to her. His voice was even perfectly pitched.
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She was cute but unremarkable. She didn't try too hard, not like the other girls. She wore jeans and a simple t-shirt. Her hair was to her shoulders and plainly styled. I don't even think she wore make-up. If she did, it wasn't much. She's not the type of girl you'd like twice at. But I liked her smile.
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